In general I quite enjoyed this. The writing was very good and I liked the story though I wish it had non-bimbo TFs. But that's a personal thing.
If I had any suggestions, it'd be to add those pics of the PC to the side menu like we see in a lot of Twine games as a profile picture.
On the down side, I noticed that a lot of content is just sort of summarized as the game goes on. For example, you're more or less just told "Your character spends the next week having lots of sex." and the final part of the available content more or less does the same thing. "You spent a lot of time having sex." I don't know if the author plans to flesh it out later or if it was more of a case of "I want to get to the good stuff" but it feels like, especially with that first one, we're missing content and build up.
The text cyoa is quite well written. The choices are limited as of this time of development and it is quite railroad, but that is okay.
Scenes are damn well written and fairly unique. Waiting for more.
There is enough content here to warrant a quick download and playthrough, and the content is good at showing the quality of the game and the direction it is going in. I am looking forward to updates on this game and hope the author can maintain momentum while avoiding burnout.
9/10 (reserving that last point for the future)
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Not much added in the new update and I would recommend those that played previous versions to just wait for another update as the new content is a fraction of the original.
Excellent job, but rather short. Worth the time!
