Unfinished Business is a HTML game about regaining your lost strength.
You start out dead, not the best beginning but you will work with what you have.
Using you limited power and presence nudge the people who live in the house your spirit currently huants towards a more corrupt lifestyle. And as they grow in corruption you will grow in strength giving you access to more and more power.
Current content takes you down the first steps in your process but more is to come.
This is my first game. i hope i have done everything correctly.
Hi everyone, been a while.
Been slowly doing things for a while but had time to finish thanks to the lockdown.
I plan to keep updating when I can, as always, no patreon pay wall, will just put it here when ready
0.5.2
0.5.0
0.4.5
0.4.1
0.4.0
2 new events for both characters and some random things for good measure.
it will tell you when you have completed the content on the left hand side
0.3.5
when to stop playing: second task with sarah done: james Shaved legs
great entry in the corruption genere! hope to see more soon!
The game has a great start and playablity, just not to much for content. Hope to see more soon down the line, has a great idea and lots that it can build off of. Keep up the great work!
[Update 4.0]
I played this game a while back and thoroughly enjoyed it. I just finished what I believe to be the end of the newly-added content and I'm very happy with what I've seen so far.
The game allows you to take a very hands-on approach to affecting characters and their behavior in a unique way. You can alter their personalities and their desires and follow up daily to progress further. It's nice to see your work unfold as time goes on.
I'm very pleased with the introduction of daily tasks and looking forward to more of them. I'm also very pleased with how transformations are presented in general, as slow progress. This is the kind of game that I could lose myself in for weeks at a time if the volume of content allowed for it.
The author is doing a spectacular job and I look forward to more content!
[Update 5.0]
I played the new content and it is awesome. I really love the way things are coming together with the siblings and I see that a lot of work was put into sorting the "if"s and what not. It's really starting to shape up. The Lush is a nice addition and I look forward to seeing more plugs and more Lush interactivity.
[Update 5.2]
The game just keeps getting better and better. The changes presented in the most recent update are small but the insight that this provides as to the direction the author is taking the game is monumental. My favorite game on the site, by far. Excellent work.
It's unfinished alright. Har har har.
Seriously though, what little content is implemented isn't bad, but the way it's designed, it takes wayyyy more clicking to do everything than it should need to. There are also some broken images, at least when playing online.
I don't really like reviewing things all that much but i have to say i love the premise, the gameplay, the models, gifs ect. really well done for an alpha of the game.
for critques
1i would say that the game needs to better track the final item (available) of sarahs training (i could do the event on repeat and the game forgot i had the item constantly after shower scenes with it)
2 i also feel like there could be a bit more story between scenes that could transitions to ideas for the ghost to do (for example i struggled hard to figure out how to get james to shave his legs.... maybe a scene showing his socks and the ghost having the idea to mess with him during his next jog?)
since its still early in developement i really don't want to add more critques until more comes out ^.^ honestly cant wait.
