Introduction
The Special Place is a secretive facility with unique equipment and personnel for transforming people into anything they want to be, or to be more accurate, anything someone else wants them to be. Your sister works there, and has been developing a whole new transformation program. She's looking for a guinea pig, and unfortunately that seems to be you...
This is my first attempt at writing a "choose your own adventure" style interactive text story. It features heavy elements of forced age regression, sissification and mind control.
May 22 2021
Added a whole new chapter to the story. The "stay with mommy" ending now branches out into this new path.
May 05 2020
Minor bug fixes and typo corrections.
February 19 2020 - The Party Update
This update includes:
October 08 2019 - The Big Day Update
July 12 2019 - The Homecoming Update
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July 04 2019 - The Independance Day Update!!!
Actually that's probably overselling it. Just a minor update to change the main characters age, and improve the random status texts.
Man, this game is a bizarre one. Because looking at a lot of the negative feedback, I get it. I even mostly agree with it. I'm not into the theme or subject matter, and honestly find it pretty disgusting and creepy. There's basically no choice or player agency in what happens. But this game still just... does it for me. And it's not that it does it for me despite those things, it does it for me because of those things, and I can sum up the reason in one word- humiliation. Man, does this game do humiliation well. I almost feel like someone who was into the adult baby thing wouldn't enjoy it as much because of just how much the protagonist is NOT into it at all. And the linearity and lack of choice, to me, seems like a clever way of getting around the problem of having forced transformation in a "Choose your own adventure" style game, without delegating the TFs to bad ends- stuff is going to happen, the protagonist wants none of it, but you have just enough influence over things to see different routes and variations. And the attention to detail in all of these variations is great. If you're not into the adult baby stuff but you are into humiliating TFs I think it's still worth checking out for that reason- but man, what I wouldn't give for a spin-off game or games going into the "other services" mentioned, especially if they were written in the same style and had the same attention to detail, I think those would be a lot more popular with people who are into humiliating forced TFs but just too turned off by the baby stuff.
Have been playing this story a lot and this is a fetish that's starved for content. I understand that some people come in here expecting a game, and that this isn't for them. In my opinion this is actually quality content - a 9/10 interactive piece of fiction, but it's not a game. If you like ABDL, this is one of the best stories on the site.
Story - 0
The whole premise is ridiculous. Your whole family wants to horribly torture and mutilate you because...reasons or something I guess. And none of it is explained. There are very few actual choices and they make no difference to the story. You choose your new name from a list of about 10, and choose whether to get your penis cut off. That's it. I played up to part 4 and it was just not interesting to me in the slightest.
Transformation - 0
Ok, so you wouldn't be getting this harsh of a review if you had actually tagged the "game" appropriately. There is no sissy content. The closest thing is that there's an option to wear a chastity cage. Nothing else. Tag your game properly and don't try and lure in people who aren't even into this kind of stuff. Not only that, but there was nothing on the synopsis saying that there was adult baby stuff, which is 100% of the transformation content, only "heavy elements of forced age regression", which as a warning, does not cut it for what this contains.
Even if I pretended it wasn't incorrectly tagged, it's still a dumpster fire. Even if you're interested in getting turned into an adult-sized oddly shaped baby, you would probably still not enjoy it. No actual story, incredibly subpar writing, unnatural and unrealistic dialogue. The whole thing is a nightmare
While I am aware there are some people with the fetish for AR and ABDL it is not even close to the more common ones seen on this site. I believe that more people may like the "game" if there was a choice between tf options like AR, just straight to MTF (either an immediate transformation or one over time), Sissy, and maybe some like Bimbo or Shemale.
One other thing I noticed that has also been pointed out by other reviewers is that the reasons for at the very least the sister, if not the mother as well, seem to never truly be explained. This is especially true for the sister who seems to be doing it just because she can.
1.5 out of 10 (would be 2.5 if it were a game and not a story)
Just to let people know this is very much a Kinetic Novel, if you're looking for a more game like experience look elsewhere.
As Morrigan stated in their review, the biggest flaw in this story is character motivation. Your Sister does horrible things to you for no reason. Even assuming she acted at the Mothers behest, this thread also unravels very quickly later on. With that out of the way, the story did hold my interest all the way through and is written well enough. Given its niche theme, and the lack of content out there, if you have an AR fetish its worth checking out.