There are other ways to get into magic university besides the admissions test. With a scholarship on the line, prove your wit in a long running battle royale hosted by a historic yet controversial all male college.
A submission for the Game Night! TFGS contest.
A group of three best friends qualify for an esoteric competition at an old mages college, a chance for a scholarship on the line. Having run for 650+ years, the Trial of Hearts tests how well contestants fit with the college's male dominant philosophy, namely by having them compete as women.
0.33a - 28/12/2019 - First version, only one encounter in the first book.
0.40a - 01/01/2020 - First book completed, two encounters. Put everything through a round of editing. Added colour coding for dialogue. Added mediafire link.
Not much content yet and there is an abrupt start and it feels disjointed at times. With a bit of polish it can be a better game
I don't mind the fairly abrupt start. I think a lot of people get caught up in trying to build too much backstory. Having said that there's not really much detail in the writing. Like, you get to the "sey parts" and the writing basically just tells you "sex happens."
This feels more like a few ideas written out in HTML than a story written for the readers. I'd like to see a lot more characterization and description to pull the reader into the story.
I was a little put off by the way the story just started immediately.
Even just a brief page of "You are So-and-So, and your friends are X and Y" might have helped.
