This Is A Story Of How Your Life Is Changes After Metting A Reaper About To Reap Your Soul But Gives You A Second Chance With A Price!
In This Game You Play As Sam A Male Or Female and You Save Your Sister But At what Cost... You Wake Up A New Person And Now You Are Going To try To Fix Your Life And See Your Sister Again, Through This Journey You Are Going To Meet Things You Thought Were Not Real and Do Things You Never Thought, So Now Its Up To You To Change Your Life and Make It look Like Its Just Some Modern Changes!
You Play As Sam (Male Or Female)
There Is Your Sister Bri
And The Reaper
More To Come Soon!
There Is Only The Male Uber Driver Path Open and Only A Few Of The Pasages Are Open On It.
0.001 Part Of Male Uber Driver Added.
0.002 Took out the capitlation so every word and added new content to the male uber driver path.
Okay so, here's my review, but also some advices that could help your studio.
To begin with, there's not a lot of content and most available options are locked, with only the Uber driver one being available. I know that the definition between Alpha and Concept is a unclear at times, but it would do you an immense favor if you classified it as a Concept instead of an Alpha as I, and most other reviewers, would be more forgiving.
Adding media will also be important, it helps the player get invoolved with your game.
Honestly, for the moment, I'm giving the game a 1/10, the variety could be interesting and an Isekai is always interesting BUT.
-Considering you marked it as Alpha
-Considering the lack of content
-Considering that most choices are currently non-existent
-Considering the lack of media (less of an issue but still)
-Considering you are a team working on this.
I cannot give you more than this in your current presentation of the game. I would recommand waiting a bit and stockpiling content before releasing an update where the players could get a better portrait of the game, the idea is interesting, but you'll need way more for me to be sold, and so it seems for other reviewers.
The biggest change, judging by previous reviews, is that the game is not capitalized.
The only valid path is the uber driver route, and it ends abruptly, just as the previous reviewer described. You might want to wait for a few more updates before this is worth your time.
I have to agree with jjars898.
It's next to impossible to even try and experience the content with Every Word Being Capitalized. Apparently this is even worse that WRITING IN CAPITAL LETTERS ONLY. Please, fix that part so we can at least read what you have written.
edited reveiw:
Ok so now there is a download link, downloaded and played what 5 minutes of it there was.
Cons:
As stated almost every word is capitalized, eye soar yes, head ache maker yes.
Only one plot/story available as stated makes things a ;little rough to judge.
Very thin plot. and story line. Get to the first sex scene and your left high and dry before you can even get to see what changes where made. (( played through twice same situation both times)
Pros:
At this point I can not find any pros for the game except one:
Decent amount of choices available (( sadly only one option available)
I had rated this 1/5 star for effort, after downloading and playing My new rating
1/5 star again for effort.
I do not think that any better can be given until there is more "meat" to EVERYTHING the game is supposed to have.
Good luck
I tried to play it, I really did...But The Capitalization Of Every Word, and teh mispelings ane missdd krystrpkes sll theoughout thw tezt, made it physically painful to read. I was hoping against hope that these problems were only in the summary, but I didn't make it past the first three sentences.
