Hi everyone OwO this is my first ever twine game, Another Truth
Another Truth is about you'll play as a guy who wakes up with a strange band attached to his wrist, upon attempting to remove it you are greeted by the AI and vaguely briefed with the situation. Now you have to do weekly tasks for which you will be rewarded and assimilation will increase and if you fail to do the tasks, punishments will be dealt with accordingly. After your first week of doing a task, you found yourself in another dimension but in this dimension, you are a girl. What is this mysterious band? Who is this AI? Why are they making you do these tasks? What's the purpose of these dimensions? All mysteries shall be unraveled as the time comes.
I'll do my best to expand the story as fast as possible while still maintaining my college work as I'm still a student T_T
And as said this is my first time making a game so It would be greatly appreciated if you can give me feedback on what should I change, what should I improve and any bugs and glitches you encounter in the game
The character design used in AI is actually based on me in real life, the rest are random and any resemblance with fictional or non-fictional characters is purely coincidental
The Hypnosis gifs were also made custom for this game as I couldn't find any relevant gifs already available that would suit the situation
Many more custom graphics are ready but not implemented and will be implemented in the coming days after I'm done with my sem finals T_T
My Patreon: [[Patreon|https://www.patreon.com/ChilliMilliLily]]
My Reddit where I post my pics every so often : [[Reddit|https://www.reddit.com/user/MiddleEasternFem/]]
Another Truth is about you'll play as a guy who wakes up with a strange band attached to his wrist, upon attempting to remove it you are greeted by the AI and vaguely briefed with the situation. Now you have to do weekly tasks for which you will be rewarded and assimilation will increase and if you fail to do the tasks, punishments will be dealt with accordingly. After your first week of doing a task, you found yourself in another dimension but in this dimension, you are a girl. What is this mysterious band? Who is this AI? Why are they making you do these tasks? What's the purpose of these dimensions? All mysteries shall be unraveled as the time comes.
For now, the game is pretty linear.
Tasks are found on the truth menu.
Your Mother is found in the living room after 1 PM and your sister is thereafter 7 PM if you want to find them to complete your tasks.
you can pass time by taking a nap for 1 hour and 3 hours.
For now, there are only minor consequences for not completing the tasks but the consequences will get greater as the game expands and gets more non-linear
For cases, there are hints spread out so I hope it doesn't become an issue
[Version 0.031]:
Update for this week is here
Once again Please report any or all bugs with the steps you took before you faced the bug so that I can re-trace it and it becomes easier to fix it
[Version 0.03]:
Note: Please report any or all bugs with the steps you took before you faced the bug so that I can re-trace it and it becomes easier to fix it
[Version 0.02.2]:
Fixed some bugs relating to flags in javascript and some other bugs. I'm still new to javascript so please keep reporting any bugs you find so I can fix them and push a new fix as soon as possible
[Version 0.02]:
Firstly I will state I'm aware this is a rudimentary game currently more as a test of sorts than a proper fleshed out idea, anyhow let's begin.
Overall if this were fully finished now, with a finale and everything, I honestly would abandon the title. It isn't bad but the disjointed pacing and story are a difficult sell and will likely turn many potential fans off of the title as a whole. Like I said, get a handle on where we're going to end up, and work on your pacing, once you get those down I think you have a very solid basis here to work into a truly good game many people will want to play (and get off to) but you definitely got some work ahead of you. Best of luck
I'm liking the direction your heading with this concept. Not a huge amount content up but enough to get the idea of the layout.
The files in the 0.022 have a lot of images missing compared to 0.02 , like alot alot. I just copied mine over into the new updated folder but might want to fix that.
Overall enjoying the work you put into it.
Very excited to see this develop! Not much content atm, but I like the potential.
Loving the concept. A lot of the time with this style of game it feels like you're continually pushing a story arc forward (or a couple of arcs). Instead in this game you have what feels like self contained mini stories with the MC getting into various scrapes all of which are helped to look like a progressing story of unfortunate events all tied together through his workplace as a semi focal point, which makes a refreshing approach and I'm a fan of.
There are a few gramatical errors here and there and I think the use of yellow for one of the characters conversations is a little harsh on the eye but hardly something to affect gameplay considering this game is in development and can be refined as feedback comes in.
Lovely start, I like the concept and the layout feels nice and different so I'm looking forward to seeing the updates when they come through. Keep up the good work and keep coding on! :D
First thing I'd Like to say is i feel some people review's (Red-XIII) are abit harsh, after playing the game which is definetly a concept but there is enough content to experience what it be like when more content has been added.
I belive it has protental to be a great game. There is alot not implemented yet but is understandable due to it being a concept.
Keep Going with the game, it be interesting what you will do with the game.