My first game ever. Have fun.
I also have a patreon page: www.patreon.com/shelly_flowers. But you don't have to contribute anything. For now you don't get anything special for donating. It's just an incentive for me to continue working on this project. And if you don't want to pay something for this early in development game, that's totally fine.
You are a young male who is moving to a different city to go to college. You hope that during your time there your body changes into a more manly appearence. And your body does change, just not in the direction you wanted.
It seems that your roomates have a special plan for you and you will meet a lot of people to help you on your new way.
Lana and Natalie - Your roomates
Riley - your girlfriend
John - Your gym partner
Miss Ann - your teacher
Ashley - another Sissy to help you on your path
On day 3 peek on Lana
On day 4 try panties --> and then research Sissy on Google
On day 5 peek on Nathalie
On day 6 go on date with Riley
For the rest of the game keep your panties on and just explore evrything :)
0.0.1: Basic concept. One week of content, not very good, though.
0.0.2: I rewrote the entire game, so now it's in the sugar cube format So it now has a save function.
Added: Gym, The Redfoot(Nightclub), University, A few stores in the mall, New characters and a second week of content.
While I kow that the first version was crap the second one is much better, with more content. It's still ligtyears from finished but now it's worth playing.
I did like how this game was beginning to look but ran into dead ends way to quick. also, what's the point in your roommate taking a weeks worth of rent twice a week, telling her to come to her room in the evening, then no matter what you do you never can go into see the progression of the story. All in all, the general storyline needs a bit of work, but it is interesting to see it progress. Don't let the naysayers get you down to much. Your game does have extensive potential. Keep up your work. Hope to see new updates soon.
At first it seems like a branching story, but if you decide not to follow the walkthrough (as you're able to do that), it still assumes, and continues on like those things did happen, for example, the roommates never put a chastity cage on my character, but at the date with the GF has the PC wearing a cage nonetheless, and he rest of the story has the chastity cage as well, that was when I realized it's a linear story, which took all the fun I had with this game away.
I played 0.0.1, and the move to 0.0.2 is certainly an improvement.
However, if we have the opportunity to choose our clothing, then going to the gym shouldn't change that clothing with different clothing when we change back. The same applies to working at the Redfoot.
For errors, etc.:
There seems to be a faulty IF tag in the locker room at the gym.
John's dark blue text is impossible to read on the dark background.
Speaking of different colours for different people, you might want to look at putting them in text containers if you want to separate them, rather than just colours. It's hard on the eyes.
v0.0.1:
A very alpha game release. It shows potential but after playing through what was available, I was left with feeling it was little more than grind filler so far. Images in the game are servicable, writing is okay but I didn't really care about the characters as I was playing through due to the lack of content... side-effect of the current release state. Interactivity in the game is usual basic Twine fare right now but it works.
I was conflicted on this one. I wanted to see more but as the player you're just too soon in the development cycle to get it.
Tough call. Worth a look, but might want to wait for a later release and more content.
Super early on. I like the use of images and the choice of which real porn images/actresses to go with for the different roles. Solid start. Does not have a save feature that I can tell, but as its fairly short right now it probably doesnt need one. Definitely a good start though and if more work is put into it it could be a good game.
