You have been thrown out of school and your mother is tired of dealing with you, and so she suggests a game night with her friends. What you find out too late is your mother and her friends have witchly powers, which you will pay the consequences for.
There is smoking fetish in this story as you can tell by the comments. I thought it would help symbolize a young man being turned into something he hates. Mainly' a middle aged smoking woman. This isn't aeveryone's (or possibly anyone's) cup of tea).
You- a 17 year old troublemaker
Your mom- a 44 year old woman who is sick of your crap
Brenda- Your friend's mother who's son was kicked out of school before you
Ethyl- Diane's stepmom a much older woman, who hangs with their group
Diane- Your other friend's mother who is a total MILF and is your mom's sexiest friend
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The game you love to hate is as done as it's going to be. This is the completed version, there are still some issues in the sidebar but I give up. I hope at least 1 person can enjoy the game.
.04
Finished game party of the story
Tried to fix any issues
.003
Added more to the backstory, and more passages.
Created patreon for no reason
Added another round and preparing for the conclusion.
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First, thanks for the 1 person who gave me some tips on working on the game it should be better now.
Named the first version wrong so this is .02
Added more to the story to make the reasoning make more sense
Fixed everything so there are no external links and everything (should) work better
Added a couple more turns to the game
I really like it the only problema is that the photos are dead. :(
I will admit that smoking is rlly rlly rlly not my thing. However, despite that, tfs are very very very much my thing. The writing is well done as far as it goes, looking forward to seeing where this goes. Also gets points for being a magical board game! *squeeee!*
I think this game has good potential and has a good baseline for further development and choices. Seems to be losely based on what mandy menthol wrote on fictionmania and I would invite any person to check it out if smoking tfs are your thing. Looking forward to more updates!
Still the same shirt, just a bit more of it.
Bullet-train-speed game that makes almost zero sense.
And the dude that enters "just in time for the sex scene" is a classic example of how NOT to write pornographic fiction.
All the "writing quality" of a short porn video without the actual advantage of it being a video.
Railroaded story, the only differences being the order and speed of the transformations, but the thing that turned me off the most was the fact that just because they all became witches, they completely disregarded any morals and ethics, but your previous "game" was pretty much the same, I thought you finally learned how to make a fun game, I guess I expected too much.
And I don't mind the smoking stuff, only the complete lack of common sense, ethics, morals, and gameplay
