"Proof of Life" release.
The story follows a student on the cusp of graduating, as he comes to the attention of the community's medical officer, with an intent of rebalancing gender ratios. Themes include coming-of-age, transformation (MtF), sexual experiences (M/M, M/F, F/F), dominance/submission, generational space travel, hypnotism, and the power of friendship. Choose Your Own Adventure (with randomization for resolving challenges).
This is an alpha release. Now with 11.5 days in first draft out of an anticipated total of 16 + epilogue.
I'm no longer looking for specific feedback, but this thread is available for discussion.
I do have a full plot detailed out. I will release the beta version once completed (i.e., all days available for play). At that point I will do a full review and rewrite of scenes within the existing structure.
Note that I have a backlog of text errors. I will be doing those updates after the beta release.
Yourself, a student, preparing to graduate into a professional career, if you can do well enough on your exams to impress anyone into inviting you.
Your best friend, your Mercutio.
The provost, the foil to your plans, both academically, as well as romantically. He prefers the community have a more female leaning, and is putting his finger on the scale to push you over as well.
The love interest, your Juliet.
The bully, he's stronger than you, better positioned than you, and he has designs on your Juliet as well.
Your mother. Not too involved in your normal ambitions, until other forces use her for their own ends.
Release .11a (May 7 2022)
Expanded to part of Day 12, with modifications and bug-edits to previous days
Replaced .gifs with .mp4s
Added images for mom and bully
Corrected some logic, adding traps
Minor logic correction to permit dynamic replacement of pronouns and images
Improved class schedule
Learned and implemented some CSS tricks
Better labeled when challenges succeed or fail
Implemented (Day 9) hooks on how to potentially control transformations
Added difficulty levels and difficulty descriptions
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Public alpha release .09. Includes completed days 1 through 9 (planned total of 16), enabled full transformations, dice mechanics tested and balanced, 60% of photos present and tagged where feasible. MISSING is: three planned random event slots, class status tracker.
One of best transformation game.
I did enjoy the limited content, the writing isn't bad, just obviously it's in need of more days, and perhaps if the future post-academic content is implemented, well, more of that. Now, on the count of physical changes happening, there seems to be little mental changes represented in the day-to-day, even something simple as a change in olfactory senses, or sexual preferences changing would be nice to have.
Still, the gameplay is there with a bit of a story, give it a try.
I love everything about this game, please give us more, you did an amazing job so far :D
Really good so far, I am looking forward to seeing how this progresses.
The choices you make really have and impact, going back a and seeing the differences is easy and the length is such that its also easy enough to restart and play differently.
It would be nice to have your changes impact on the training scenes, but the main story is the most important part to complete.
Really good start, good premise, well written, looking forward to more!
