James is your average no-good loser, whose life is in ruins thanks to his twin sister, Olivia. After going through a breakup with the love of his life, James decides to change his life for good but not in a typical fashion. Impersonating as his sister, James now has to save his love life and himself... but will that be the end?
Storytelling is good but laking the erotics for now. Except some skin nothing is there at the moment.
No grind so far, which is a plus and the hints are ok. Maybe an option to deactivate em could be nice.
The paths could all be interestng and I'm looking forward to future updates.
Interesting start and a lot of good points. The story is enjoyable enough although could do with some minor editing to reduce the amount of text a little.
The gifs/pics are well chosen although many of them are stretched and so look strange. Could do with sorting out.
Finally the back ground or choice text could do with some work. The choice text is hardly visible against the current back ground and is very hard to make out. This maybe due to me suffering from color blindness but as about 10% of men do maybe altering this so it is darker or stands our more would really help.
Other than that I look forward to further updates.
game has potential. i'd shorten up the dialogue, it tends to drone on a bit. Also, Quality-of-life suggestion, don't name the file with periods in the title. it's going to lead to coding errors
Promising start,
will watch with interest.
The story is good , but one suggestion i would make is some CSS work to increase the font size a bit .and maybe a color charge for the narration Versus the characters so you can tell between two .
could even use specch bubbles to break up tthe dialogue ....and give it a cleaner look
That said its a great start ...and i can't wait to see what you do with it keep up the good work
