Online copy doesnt appear to work for me at all, my guess at the issue entirely wrong unfortunately. Hopefully someone else can confirm.
Game itself as promised a simple twine CYOA, played through a few endings and everything works as far as i saw.
There's a few spelling/grammatical errors but not surprising for an early version. Might pop over to your forum post and point out the few i saw.
Would like to see a few extra images strewn throughout, what Riya looks like or what the main char is supposed to look like. However that's personal preference and played a few other games with even less images.
Great Job though, as i said i found no major issues and the writing is good