So it's a very early Twine game made with pictures from kisekae.
I've posted a few on DeviantArt and now wanted to try this platform
I've experimented with some randomness html coding
I hope you like it and feel free to leave suggestions
Oh yeah, my DA: https://www.deviantart.com/tgnoob05
P.S.
Had some comments about the randomness, basically if there are hidden paths it sais path x/y. just refresh the page untill you get the other path
Dude finds rock, things happen
0.1 Initial release, very early development
0.2 Added little bits, made it more clear when paths end
I seems that the random number generator don't work (I could only go to path 2) wich is really sad as when looking throough the file this path is the shortest out of many.
You could try to fix it but I would prefer that you give to the player the choice of the path they want to take , random path always feel like pointless work for completionist like me.
The game look great by it's files but I can't play it right now so I can't give any feedback.
EDIT 1: Said nothing , the random number generator work fine. I tought that it didn't work because I reloaded the page 10 time and only got the 2nd path but it was just my luck (less than 0.1% chances)
EDIT 2:
The game is promising . There isn't much right now but I love what is already here. I will come back to it in the future . The game has TF content on the main caracter.
More than half of my clics in my play were on reloading the page , I may be (very) unlucky but it show that the randomness can be a real issue.
I tried restarting the story many times, and I haven't reached a TF so far. The story seems to end without any further text or advancement possible for now...
i like the plot
