Short but sweet. Nice artstyle, good introduction to story.

You made me more interested in the world of this story which is very nice!

A few points

Font: It is hard to read at times, especially the cursive and the pink on blue makes it extremly blurry.

Who is MC? Consider adding abit about who he is before transformation. Not necessary but for me it adds alot. Could be made as him talking to friends after or whatever you like.

I hope this will receive updates. It has flaws, but those are more of a technical nature. Like how the pink text is hard to read on the light blue background, or how you can't use the arrow keys to select a choice. I also didn't know if the save feature was even working, because clicking it gives no feedback at all. Clicking the save icon even advances the text, so I really thought it did nothing. I realized later that you do in fact have a single save slot. With the game in it's current state I guess more isn't necessary, as bad ends allow you to return to the last choice that led you to it, but as someone who likes to experience all branches I hope you'll get more slots in the future.

A decent start! Looks promising would add more save options for starters, looking forward how this one unfolds.

A really good start to a really interesting story! The artstyle is clean and consistant throughout, and the characters are well written.

This might just be me, but a lot of the characters dialouge were difficult to read, with how lightly colored the words are against the dialouge. I'm not saying change the colors but maybe add a darkened border around the lettering.

Aside from that, I'm highly interested in how this story will go. Looking foward to seeing future updates!

For now, this game have a promising future. I like the premise. Can't wait for next update.