From a presentation and polish perspective, this is good for a game early in development that only has a small amount of content.

It looks nice; the interface is easy to use; the videos and images are appropriate; and the writing is solid.

The tutorial (which is all of what's available) does a perfect job of holding the player's hand and learning the mechanics and navigation system.

The initial introduction (pre wheel) was offputting for me. I didn't engage with the main-character's criminal tendencies, and I didn't relate to their tiny peepee or cowardly way of life. It's possible I could if they were described in a different light, but I didn't. I really did not like the MC during the intro.

This is a problem, as you have to take the part of this character and immerse yourself in their life for the duration of the game. It could also put people off before they've got anywhere near the actual "game".

However, in terms of a logical story hook, the MC digs their own hole and so what happens afterwards makes a kind of sense - much more sense than this kind of game usually makes - still not as easy to engage with as The Good Son (which is the benchmark for these "compelled" genre games), but better than most.

As the game progresses, and the wheel spins again and again, the MC becomes a bit easier to tolerate.

That said, there are some issues, and the overall feel reminds me of Size Queen Cruise Ship, which also has an MC that isn't very likeable but for most of the game their personality gets out of the way and we don't have to deal with it. Probably a few other elements from SQCS will be appear in WoS as it develops, as both appear to be in much the same genre.

The author creates an atmosphere here, a certain feel, and you make like it - or not - but it's really that "vibe" that makes or breaks the game. I'm not sure the author really knows what they are trying to say, and to some extent they are just having fun with scenarios they like. The current version lacks any strong erotic content but you can see where it's headed. I have a premonition that BBC content is probably going to feature prominently, and it's already there in small doses.

There are quite a few other games like this, and they developed odd plot twists later in development as the author became overly ambitious. I hope the author of this one doesn't go that way.

A month is a very compressed time period for the character to have a serious transformation journey, so that's one problem with the game's concept that might bother some people.

The feel is an interesting mix of cliche and freshness. The cliched transformations and scenes are here (or at least promised), but presented in different ways, or with a slightly different spin to usual. Kudos to the author for making it all quite internally consistent, even if it is still game-world logic. The way different paths are offered, or directions emerge has some nice approaches.

Its very subjective whether this is a well made game demo for a good game, or just a well made game demo, but at least it's one of these... I hope the quality is maintained in any future updates that deliver on the core gameplay.

This is not one of those games where you play it, and you think, "this is a mess, but maybe if some stuff gets fixed it can be good" ... this is well put together from the start. If there are problems, they revolve around the author's intentions and not what they failed to implement yet. However, there isn't much content yet, and it is, as the author says, just a tutorial.

Some of the "memory" aspects of the game might end up being overly tedious due to the lack of automated morning routine, etc.

It's worth a look, but if you're like me, the early prologue is a hard grind and it won't be much fun until the wheel starts to spin. I think it's worth sticking with it at least to that point.

On the negative side, in terms of how it addresses deeper issues behind gender and transition, it's entirely about the "small penis" aspect, which is ok for an erotic game, but probably a bit alienating if you are sensitive to some of these issues and a bit boring if that size obsession doesn't hit your kinks.

It's also one of those games where, "you did a bad thing, so any bad thing that happens to you is ethical", which is not a very balanced perspective. While we could imagine the MC going on some kind of realistic journey of self-discovery, you can be pretty sure that's not going on in this game, because "he" has a month to play the game and people don't really change at that speed. I can imagine it will be more of a roller-coaster of crazy that pivots mainly around the MC's little peepee and the antagonist's big cock.

It will probably be fun if you just want to fap, and you engage with the fantasy, but there will also be people for who this just does not hit right.

There's also the question of whether the "proper" game will be a bit grindy, or start to get into trouble due to a small number of characters with potentially conflicting storylines (the Making of a Slut problem).

It's a good start with a lot of promise. The author seems to be well organized, so this is one to watch for now.

Not bad for a twist in the story. But it can be improved.

Let there be 2 or more main paths for MC and GF. In my opinion Mistress path and Snowbunny path is most suitable in their relationship. She should be easily corrupted as a snowbunny but that is kinda anti climatic, but considering their established trust and love, if MC remains honest and perform his feminization tasks with her instead of doing it alone she should be able to become mistress. She will still ride bulls but there exist some love in the relationship.

Second, girl MC stole from should be claimed as the main mastermind, a hacker who was baiting MC. And when she found out about him and his security she was the one who thought that it was more use to her if MC was a sissy or so. Overall, currrent villain Aaron does not feel tasked with promising idea. If he is so busy, why would he even waste time on MC who is kinda useless for him, so make him the contractor who other person hired.

Overall, some solid plot with some obvious plot holes. Erotic wise there is nothing major for now, GF relationship is quite good, and game can be quite good in long run. In the end sissification is just a form of corruption with some added steps, a good story here would be MC getting either actively participating into it or not, and how these things impact his relationships and life.

Excellent start. It's hard to innovate in this subgenre, and this game adds some nice elements both of gameplay and on the moral structure driving the transformation -- the last part is especially important, since in most games with the Invol tag, the one forcing the transformation is either amoral or outright immoral. Excellent start. I hope this one gets updates.

This is a great start!

The content so far seems to have the Wheel's selections forced. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes up when it's randomly chosen.

The premise behind this has some novelty and the NPCs are sufficiently well-rounded characters to be interesting. I see a lot of promise here and am eager to see the next update.

what there is right now is just basically an intro but its a good start would keep a close eye on this one, it does have potential the premise is somewhat makes sense so i hope this will get fleshed out sooner or later, props to the maker