i just have to say that for an initial release this game is fire, it is probably the best interactive story (not sure i would call it a game at the moment due to linearity) i have seen on this site since s.l.u.t academy

Great intro and hangs right where things start to get interesting.  My biggest early on question is how the real world will be effected by the game world?  

That's some serious top quality sh*t here.

The only bad thing right is how little content there is after the TF, compared to how long it took to get there, as there's quite a bit of setup and world building, everything top quality though.

But that point of criticism will become meaningless if the game grows, as I hope it will.

Edit: Could be there was one, and I just don't remember, but make sure there's a noncon trigger warning at the start so the people who need trigger warnings have nothing to cry about.

Great start, kind of feels like Joe Forests new story about VR headsets.

Hopefully we see this continue to the end.