this was very good im defidently going to follow this but there is a small lack of choice for costumes and i would like to see a couple added and im sorta disapointed with the high fantisy section and feel that the demon costum is a must have for a game like this and im sora disapointed with the tali ending i realy feel there should be a bit about her intelligence changing the course of humanity but besides that all currently wear able costums are great and well written but i would like to see a vampire costume(avoid twilight breed of vampire if you do) besides the small complaints i have its a wonderful read.

Promising, yet there is close to no content for an alpha