Hey I apologize in advance for any frustration.
This is my very first attempt at making a game like this with my basic understanding of Twine.
As such it is very short and rail roaded at the moment. Any advice and constructive critisism is welcome.
Will be working on extending all current storylines and creating the ones that are currently not implemented
Contains heavy elements of beastiality and domination/non consent. If these do not interest you then this game isn't for you
A create your own adventure game with branching pathes and selectable characters
First: The game DOES have content; you simply have to choose to play a girl in order to access any of it. This is, after all, an Alpha, so maybe we should quit griping about nonexistent problems and give the author a chance.
Second: I've given the author a chance, and I can honestly say I loathe this game. But that's possibly because, again, the game is an Alpha, with huge swaths of missing content. Beyond the first one or two passages, you are basically forced immediately into nonconsensual sexual situations, two thirds of which involve bestiality, no matter which activity you choose. Apparently we will eventually be given the option to resist these nonconsensual acts (the word "Resist" is there, but it mostly doesn't link to anything, or if it does it's to a dead end). IF these acts of resistance prove to be effective, this might turn out to be a decent game. But the author's habit of ignoring the paths where one does not, for example, blow the doberman ... or the football player ... make me suspect that this game and this author are more interested in railroading the player into nasty situations than in an actual corruption simulation.
Also there is no transformation in this game or even in the Themes, so if that's what we're looking for I suspect we'll all be a little disappointed.
Still, the writing style isn't bad, so I'll keep a cautious eye on this one.
WARNING! GAME HAS NO CONTENT!
Broken, nothing to the game after choosing gender.
(This Review was created to tell creator to post up in Forums, they now have, so I am gonna leave this blank, except to tell you this, anyways hopefully he gets it completed and I cna write a real review...)