This game looks promising, looking forward to how the story develops

Really short but looking forward to future progress.

Well, there's not much to say about it at the moment. Of course, thats to be expected with a game thats this early in development, I like the concept. The writing needs a little bit of work, but this should be taken with a grain of salt, as its just getting started. Personally i see it has a lot of potential, and with continued dedication, it can be amazing.

Maybe try including actual content or at least a forum link before you set up a page?

.....their is no download link.......