This is a simple short game with only two plots to the finish.
It was a mechanism for me to learn the RAGS engine and one person who reviewed it thought I should put it up.
This game aims to introduce a new world and that changes can occur in because of a NPC.
Three young men are on night out looking to pick up, when they get picked up by a mystery woman.
John
Roger
Bob
The Mystery Woman
Given the short nature of this game I don't plan on putting together a walkthrough.
It's still a little short to really say something about it. But the beginning is nice. The stories wherein a man after a night partying and flirting changes in to a girl are still very popular. But I hope you can bring something new onto the table.
The changes are described well but it feels a little bit too fast (but that is mostly my opinion). Also try to get a proof-reader for you text, I found a few strange sentences that could be corrected with help of a good proof-reader.
I really like the start you have here. I also like the silverlight version of the web player a lot more. I appreciate what you've got here and hope to see you expand it!
-Tina B
Rag on browser again.
Basically there is no game nor story, so, I am not sure why this is here. There is about 2 locations, one conversation and a handful of pictures. The text is fair, but there is just little to show. I guess it shouldn't be here until you have the first night done, which you can then call it a prototype, let along an alpha. This one is a Hello world.