Hi all :). Had this idea after watching a certain movie and my diseased mind came up with this.
The story is that a father trying to reconnect with his daughter accidentally switches bodies with her.I'm really interested in the progression of the character toward corruption, especially in a gradual way. Some people may be put off by the themes since it's kind of incesty, maybe?
Right now it is just a few pages but I did manage to write the first sex scene which I thought was a good point to post from 
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I'm very new to Twine and it needs lots of work so feel free to tell me I'm doing it wrong.
*Update 3/3/2015*
More paths and more sex scenes.
Pretty good start, I woul've loved to see more, but it seems the author left it behind without saying a word about it, if you dropped it, then tell everyone, and you're probably not dead either, because you've been online within the last 2 days, but haven't posted anything in the forum, nor have you replied to any thread at all in the last 5 years (unless someone hacked your account, then your untimely demise could still be possible).
I really wanted to see the finished product, but like most games here, they just get left unfinished, and get abandoned without a word from their creator about it, some authors at least have the decency to tell people that they're abandoning it, doesn't matter if they tell us the reason or not.
This is interesting. I know it's been a couple years since the last update, but I would hope the maker would revisit it someday.
Definitely want to see this completed, pretty good so far.
Keep it up! What you have here is a great starting framework for a game. The themes and ideas you're using are some of my favorites: MtF, Corruption, Bimbo. Great job so far!
Good. Hope for continuation. Incest is nice as a fantasy unfortunaely I remember only one other with the theme implied here - "You're Dead, Try Again" (bus route).
