Unfortunately, the poor English kills this one for me

English doesn't seem to be this writers first language. Although its definately still possible to understand what is going on. Its a fairly decent RAGS game for what normally passes here.  

Would like to see a bit more content before it goes up here. I mean, what sort of feedback could you get at this point beyond what you could get by testing it yourself? The different color text is clearly broken and much of the character's motivation seems odd and fairly thin. In terms of tone, I think the game would be more fun if it had a more whimsical tone. Rather than an old man complaining that women seem to have it better. 

So far, the content is pretty solid.  It is kind of frustrating to do the whole "Remove clothes > sleep > put clothes back on" type thing, but some people might appreciate that level of detail more than I.  As far as how far the game is progress wise, I like that you can actually get to the TF part, but it seems like a long way to go for nothing more afterward.  However, for a non-final release, pretty good, I look forward to more!