A young stud gets what he deserves after broking a girl's heart.
DISCLAIMER : english is not my mother tongue so expect grammar errors and not so detailed paragraphs.
However if you want to add details or ideas to the story or even rewrite bits of it, you are most welcome.
This game will mostly contain ORAL SEX as sex scenes, be warned.
Version 0.0.4 : More fixes and grammar, a bit of content again, in preparation for a big content update !
Version 0.0.3 : Mostly fixes, a bit of content and better pacing ( I hope ! )
Version 0.0.2 : Minor changes, fixes, UI stuff and a small branch added for people who like non-instant ( still fast though ) TF.
Sadly, despite having some potential, the fact that it’s once again another instant-TF (so many bring down the quality of the whole) hinders the thematic elements of the story. It’s a solid story for what it has, but it looks like it will never be finished. Another one of the countless unfinished games that leave you wondering what might have been. What’s there is definitely worth playing – just leaves you wanting more.
This game is really short, but it has a lot of potential!
0.0.4:
Has potential, but at this early stage of development I'm more curious about the future decision pathways your avatar can be effected by after the introduction.
Writing is acceptable, code looks stable and I found no bugs in my multiple playthroughs to the endpoint of the current content. Transformations are limited right now, but allowed for quite broadly in the code and the status tracker is useful for keeping an eye on your more risky decisions and their effect to your avatar.
But there is still more to come and the current level of this release prevents me from doing too indepth of a review.
Cautiously recommended, but I need to see future releases to better understand how far this interactive story is going to go between light hearted and dark punishment torture.
One of my favorite games around here. Hope to see more of it :). 4/5 (it's pretty short)
Definitely a good game already. There isn't much yet, but I can definitely tell it will be a good one once it has more progress. Give it a try, you won't regret it.
