v.002:

Difficult call. The writing in this Twine CYOA is descriptive and sets the scene, but the current release of this game means you've got to save your game to experience all of the work done so far before you hit a dead end on a choice pathway. There are no images in this game and the interactivity is limited to choice making, but the "groundhog day" element is amusing. Transformations in the game are limited with this current release.

There's the promise of a good CYOA here, but I long to see more of the completed work with future versions.

Worth a look.

very fun and exciting game. wish it would be updated to feature father and brother scenes.

I like the game so far. There's a couple dead ends, and I couldn't continue on with Abby to get her, and it looks like the only path in that way leads her to be with that other guy, which kind of bugged me. Overall, it's still pretty cool.

I really love this game. My only disappointment is how the only real way to get repeated days is by starting the game over, as there is only one real day. 

But that may change in the future. Also hoping for more of the older sister... Maybe a little more hardcore interaction on Kevin's part.

So far I enjoy the writting and story concept alot. I just hope you "don't go ham" with the branching paths and never finish it.. Do what the review said below it makes the most sence utitlzied the mechinacs that you have in place ultilizing the time loops, and unlocking scenes behind tranformations.... that will keep you from creating too big of a story.. but all in all for where I think you are heading I really do like what I have read so far.