In the future, scientific advances allow one to travel between different worlds.
However, when you go to one in search of resources to bring home, things go wrong when you lose your protective equipment.
A glitch in your DNA has changed your gender, and now you got to find a way home while doing your job before it is too late.
This game is my first attempt at making something more substantial in Twine.
It is also the first release, so the game probably has bugs and is imbalanced.
If you have any suggestions or comments please provide them.
And please leave a review. :)
With what's there I do like it, however there isn't a lot so don't think I can offer much criticism.
The setup was ok, nothing too special considering all the other games on here, but it wasn't bad either. The resource scanner adds a mini game to the overall goal of going home was a nice touch. I like that it appears there are multiple ways of completing objectives in the future if the priest and his preferences are any indication. The way you gain money is a bit lenient just wondering around and you could earn 10 or more each time. Maybe remove that to force players to get an actual job? I do hope you go further in depth with the mental changes, if you take anything from this that's what I want the most. Oh and Alicia seems nice.
So yeah its short but there's potential.
The game has great potential, but in it's current form it gets cut short quite quickly. There is enough randomness that you can play it several times however that same randomness is sometimes infutiating when you are looking for something in particular while exploring or researching in the library.