I think that if you update this game more and add something in the page, so we won't see just the white background, more colors, and some strange decisions when a person is young and do everything even if is ridiculous, even if the game is not so updated i still like the idea of what you are trying to do, in this place we don't usually see games of actually what is really the life, in this case of a college guy.
P.D: I'm not a native english so maybe there are some errors in my text(?.
Obviously the content is quite short and there are some grammatical issues. However, I am interested in the overall premise of the story that you have provided in your description. Simply the concept is well enough, your execution is what i am interested in. If we can work on your grammar, your exposition, and characterization of the two characters we have in place, I believe the intro could be much stronger. As a tidbit, I believe it would be nice (no idea how complicated this would be) to name each of the characters in your family, or at the very least, the PC/POV Character. I would love to help, though the coding of such things is beyond me. Writing, I can do. I would concur with the earliest review that states the description can be improved. The PC is simultaneously unrealistic and vague. Again, if we could have the abilty to customize our personal appearance with simple things such as "black hair" or "well muscled" or "rail thin" this would add some immersion to the game. I do hope you continue though as this is an intriguing start.
Not much here. I like the pictures you've used and there is a nice amount of choices in the content that is there.
It was tough, but after some careful consideration I have to say about your game.
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College Life / 10
would College again
That said, I encourage you to continue on in your game making endevours. As of now this is barely an introduction, much less a concept. But best of luck to you.
Not a concept it will be when you finaly start the story
1 thing for sure you love big breasts a lot.