Touch of the Sea is the tale of a young man returning to his father\'s home and the changes he goes through as a result. He must find a way to come to terms with these changes while navigating the ways thet affect his relationship with others as well as the secrets they reveal. This is a CYOA game made in Twine.
Currently this is an Alpha release, just the introduction. Full release is planned for sometime by the end of December
0.0.2 Color scheme change, adaptive font width
0.0.1 Initial Release
Great story, well written.
Love what's currently here. It pushes my buttons the right way, and manages to balance story with smut. Hope to see more soon!
The author has gotten rid of the blue background, so it's a bit easier to read. The text is still blue, hyperlinks are a darker blue.
There is a LOT of writing - don't ask me what it is about, because I just skim when I see that. So far, you really only have one choice to make and that leads immediately to End of Content.
Kind of an interesting idea but the game is seriously flawed by being difficult to read! First, there is WAAAAAY too much text on each page. Second, the text is not scalable so you can't make it larger for easier reading. Third, the text is light blue on a sky blue background! Even the hyperlinks are a shade of blue, making the game just plane unpleasant to process. The story may be good, but these flaws are problems that have to be overcome to make the game really playable.
An amazingly well done first version release. The writing is great and the premise is intriguing. I really look forward to seeing where this goes and what you decide to do with the story.