You drift off into a dream about your girlfriend, but your choices might have real world consquences.
This is the very first game I've ever made in twine, and it's little more than a proof of concept at the moment. I\'m trying to get to grips with various techniques so hopefully I will update this game when I learn how they work.
Any and all feedback welcome, especially specific coding advice.
Update 2: fixed a broken path
Should have fixed the download link as well
0.2 fixed broken path
As of 0.2 it's a fairly enjoyable CYOA kind of game, but it's phenomenally short and most of the paths end up in similar places. Could maybe do with a few lines that don't end with you as a submissive or where you wake up to your normal relationship but otherwise works well enough.
The game download seems to be locked by a decryption key. Perhaps you have a password yes? Just a HINT HINT perhaps I am blind or tired.
Sincerely, Therefore Pie
As a proof of concept, this is excellent. The author understands how to branch and bring together Twine paths, and I like the way decision points are implemented.
As an interactive story, it's perfectly good. I like the kinks, I think the chosen images are solid, and it flows pretty "logically," for an example of the genre.
As a game, well, it isn't really one - I do look foward to the author's venture into that category, though! A good writer with a handle on twine is one to watch!