I played this game right after spending hours on 'Who wanna be a Bimbo' and I have to say I am impressed! The dynamic avatar system works so well here, now that there is a reason behind the transformations (unlike in WWBB, which was fun in its own way).
*SPOILER*
This game has the potential to be one of the best on this site. It has so much going on for it. There is Virtual Reality, Fantasy, Blackmail and obviously, transformation. I especially love how the nerds take control of her both in real life and in the Virtual World. This game pushes my buttons in all the right ways!
A few people have complained about the formatting (or lack thereof), but I personally felt it was alright. The dialogues are in a different color but I do see what they are trying to say. The readability will be better with punctuation.
I just hope, with all my heart, that this game does not get abandoned. You're doing a great job Dahakma!
My score - 8/10
(This game is a definite 10/10 if it gets completed)
The text formatting has only gotten worse.
All these different sizes and styles just make it obnoxious to read. You should focus mostly on having a simple font that's easy to read (like this one) and stick with that. Having all these different sizes, flashing, bold and not, etc. It's seriously getting in the way of just reading the damn thing.
Please stick with plain text as much as possible, you're not making it more interesting by trying to reinvent the wheel, you're just making it more dfiifcult to read.
And because this seems like a growing trend around here. I have to emphasise...PLEASE USE QUOTATION MARKS AROUND DIALOGUE. It's normal literary formatting, it's how we're all conditioned to distinguish between actions and dialogue in any written work. We have centuries of writing using this style. When this game already bombards you with variable formatting it's just giving our eyes more things to try and pay attention to rather than just allowing us to read and when people rely on color diffierences it doesn't help people who have color blindness.
"It's not difficult" he desperately implored, "please juse use the quotation marks"
This is a story, not a contest to see how much text formatting you can jam into something.
Really great so far, one of my new favourites.
But please keep adding!
Couple suggestions: Add a character customiser, the random one works fine, but it'd be far better to be able to pick each part individually.
Also feel the only part of the writing that is lacking is the actual sex. I get the whole 'the build up is more important than the actual act', or however that character worded it, and I agree. But I think its really missing the fact that those same intentions and emotions that make the build up sexy can be felt during the act too. The visual description of the act dont really matter because its a text game, but spend more time detailing what the protagonist is feeling as she performs each degrading action that make up the whole act.
I'm ranting a bit but I really think this could become one of the best games on here!
I like the way this game evolves, looking forward to updates.
I really like this game, can't wait for more content.
