Soooo, this is my first time making a game.
At the moment it doesn't has huge amount of content and it's a very linear story.
I'm not a native English speaker so if you find any language mistakes, please let me now.
All kinds of feedback is welcome and much appreciated!
I also made a discord! Feel free to drop by: https://discord.gg/jdWM4UH
It's about a guy who has a rather boring life, but certain events will make his life hopefully a bit less boring.
A mysterious girl - Rose
Bully - John
Two friends - Jack and Tommy
Mom - Well, she's your mom
V1.0 - Added around 3000 new words and it now has it's first ending.
V0.1 - Initiate release
Calling this a 1.0 version doesn't make much sense when there is so little content. The story itself is rather linear as others have mentioned and you aren't given that many options so far, which is understandable - there are some thread that I may look forward to exploring.
The size of the game is an issue for something so short, and I'd prefer if I could turn any/all sounds off. My biggest gripe is the language, the author is probably not a native English speaker and should find someone who could proofread because the broken English takes away quite a lot from the story.
Like Aggressive Zone stated before, I like content that is availible and am realy curious to see where it will lead.
I also like that there is an ending allready, although the route is a bit short.
Good luck with the game and keep the updates coming ;)
Oke so far really enjoying the content available
Love all the cute pinkstuff that is shown really my thing!!
I tried a few routes and actually with all of them im currious to see where they lead
Sooo keep up the work i hope we get a few more updates on this one. I liked it alot at least !!
Also love the pictures you picked very unique havent seen the stuff used before
Wasnt able to find the ending update mostly added a couple of pages in to different routes
Pretty linear, but it has a good start. Good luck and keep at it.
Game has arround 340Mb. One video alone has 260Mb. Another, 40Mb.
Developers need to think more about these. Easy to see gigantic files for small games and only one source for download (sometimes, with restrictions for paid users).
About the game, small (as advised) but good start. Lets see how it progress (hopefully a non linear story).