Sketched the first concept of a possible game in a couple of weeks. I just wanted to make sure that the text in the game is readable, since English is not my first language.
The basic concept is that the protagonist and his relationships with others change under the influence of certain circumstances.
You will take on the role of the head of a marketing firm. You are used to winning and achieving your goals. You have a social status, a loving wife, a lot of money and a lot of ambitions. But will you be able to save all this? Or will your whole life be inverted?
Currently in the game:
Your wife is Adriana - Adriana
Your secretary - Abella
Your best friend - Josh
Your mistress - Angela
And in order to find out what this awarding of names means, you need to play a game.
Just play, there is no need for a walkthrough right now.
A kind of trial version. Content for 5 minutes. There is only a tie in the game so far and nothing else.
Hi, you wanted feedback on the text and how readable it is. In my opinion its fine, noticed few weird phrasing, but only few. English is not my main language either, so probably not the best to comment on it. Wrote this just to let u know, that the text is good and readable, i don´t think anyone would have much issue about it.