First off. I really like the premise and I hope to see the dfeveloper continue working on the game!
There's not too much content as of now but what there is so far makes a good job at introducing characters, even if it is really oddly paced. I can understand the author wanting to include some sexual scenes both in VR and in the normal game world but while the VR one is nicely impelented, the "normal world" one is really rushed. Might not be a bad idea to push it a bit further with the expansion of the story.
From the technical point of view the game looks mostly soild with a few unexpected blank pages forcing you to rewind them.
Over all, the game is short but has huge potential and I look forward to seeing the updates.
Well written, with promise if it is continued. The only thing I would change is the blue lettering for the mothers text should be changed as it is very hard to read as is.
promising game, hope you keep at it
Good writing, albeit some typos can be found, they didn't ruin the mood. The story overall carries on from the last update, with further expansion post initial VR dive including feminisation, and a potential step-sister spanking scene. Pretty cool, and sets up well for future integration with the female teacher.
To be perfectly fair, you don't need to focus too much on multimedia for now, I'd say just work on the story slowly, then you can backfill media as needed to fit the written scenes. Anyway, like in my previous review, the summary is the same: good setup, can't wait to see more!
Almost 0 content right now but the first part of the game is good, i'll keep a look at it and wait. Gj so far