Nice base looking fine interessted to see where it goes. since its a bit short right now
Can't really say it was all that bad in 0.1, but 0.2 is really short, although with a slightly better start. Still, needs quite a bit more work to make it something more than just a linear story. Best of luck.
There are lots of games like this. The first version had a bit more content but the second version is a little more structured with a better story. Still issues with the english in the translated version but, I see this as a small issue, and rather a big thankyou to the author for takig the time to translate it to english so we can share the story.
The only concern I really have is the story is moving really quickly, and I'm concerned its going to make for a very short game. But not knowing what the long term plan is, I can't be sure on that.
Well Done! Great Start
As stated, the game is fairly linear. As this is an early build, that is perfectly fine. Hopefully as more builds come out, that will be expanded upon.
The English version does have spelling and grammitical errors, but they aren't awful. Never did I get pulled away from the content. The writing, itself, is fairly basic, and the closest I could compare it to would be young adult literature. Not terrible, but not great either, yet it gets the point across.
Regardless, as an early build, this is worth a look. 6.5/10
Interesting story its somewhat unique to alot of other games.
So far it is a liniar path but i can see there comming multiple once.
Progression is daylocked so if you try anything else then the path layed ahead you will not see all content.
As fellow non native english speaker the translation is done pretty well.
My german isnt as good as my English but if there are any mistakes i havent seen them. (did not pay alot of attention to it tho)
Good game looking forward for new updates!