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HTML
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XXX
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English
Release Date
06/25/2013
Last Update
09/22/2014
Version
1.0.1
Development
Beta
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The Journey Outside

Journey outside the shelter as Terry, and discover the world that you've been denied your entire life.

Terry leaves the shelter he grew up in and enters into the world outside for the first time. What was the plague that his parents sought to escape? What kind of society is left, if any, after it ravaged the population?

Terry

Terry is the player character, an 18 year old male forced into the world.

The Old Man

A man you might meet that will change your life.

Barbara

A friend, companion, or competition that you might encounter in your journey.

Master Michael Lang

A powerful man with global influences

Caleb

Loyal servant of Michael Lang

Lissa

The oldest daughter of Pa. 

Coraline

The youngest daughter of Pa. 

Tom

The eldest child and only son of Pa, member of Master Lang's militia. 

Pa

A poor, cruel man raising his three children. 

Miranda

Owner of the Seattle brothel and only free woman in Seattle. 

Malcolm

Master Lang's slave trainer. 

Cora

An athletic whore in the brothel 

Meredith

A sensual whore in the brothel 

Tori

A very confident whore in the brothel. 

Marla

A submissive whore in the brothel.


Latest Reviews - View All Reviews

Review by RedGhost

Version reviewed: 1.0.1 on 04/18/2021


v1.0.2 (https://www.dropbox.com/s/0i26jvu4tfmw2qn/JourneyOutside102.zip):

Beta version Twine game with better production quality. The TFGS link to the left is for the older v1.01 version.

Setup of the game looks good with the menu layout you're given, but it is a text-based game and there are no other images. Introduction is well written and you have some interactive choices to make on the CYOA pathways that can lead so some transformations and world building. Specifically of note the majority of the game build attention has been given to the "Find the water!" pathway instead of the "Look for plants that can be eaten" pathway.

There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in the game, but not enough to get into a twist over. Going through what I've found in the game, there are some bad endings (some of which you'll get railroaded on to and never realise since there are still more option choices occurring) and other dead endings that aren't written into the game yet.

But sadly there's just not much of a game here beyond that: you're teased once again with promise only. I think it's abandoned from how long it's been since there was an update but you never know these days.

Worth a look.


Review by daisycyoas

Version reviewed: 1.0.1 on 11/10/2020


It's a decent game with enough content to occupy your attention for one, maybe two evenings. The smut is well written, though what's there is mostly for those who prefer playing as victims. If you're not into that then playing this game would be a waste of your time.

+ It's short but action-packed.

+ Your choices matter and that's a huge plus that deserves it's own point, even if there aren't actually that many important choices to make in this game.

+/- A lot of unavoidable sexual violence.

+/- According to the author "the story has over 90,000 words and is approximately 35% complete". Whatever ambitious plans they had for this game, it doesn't matter now, but fortunately what's there isn't just an introduction to a story that goes nowhere. The Journey Outside offers several paths with clear or implied endings that make the whole package feel closer to 70% complete, assuming those unfinished paths would end similarly to the finished ones. Don't want to say more here because the game heavily relies on the surprise factor.

+/- The story is more about adapting to the unpredictable than forging your own path. As I said above, what's there is mostly for those who prefer playing as victims. The player agency is limited in those paths, which isn't necessarily a flaw at that point of the game. 

- Your choices do matter, but the most important choices are also the least intuitive.

- Later into the game, your character might also do things you wouldn't want them to do.

If you want to play this game, there's a link to 1.02 version on page 34 of the discussion thread. The IGDB entry is outdated.


Review by Slarkki

Version reviewed: 1.0.1 on 09/03/2015


Pretty good story. Several nice scenes although there are no pictures at all which is a bummer. Surprisingly long but still the end of content comes at a surprise. There aren't really that many choices the player can make and I don't know how meaningful they are other than flavor. I liked the beginning, then I thought the story took a completely unwanted turn but later the story managed to get more interesting again.


Review by TheeSpongeman

Version reviewed: 1.0.1 on 03/29/2015


I don't know what everybodies problem is. I love it! Everytime I ran into an unfinished branch I'd usually curse in dissapointment. Your very descriptive, and have created your own world and society that I was actually eager to explore. Keep it up!


Review by Spino2308

Version reviewed: 1.01 on 08/18/2014


Well written and a good start to what could be an epic game. Keep it up and ignore any negatives it is a good game


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