Previous reviews have lots of criticism about it being unrealistic for Russia. Ok, so it's set in an alternate Russia, what's the problem? Also some criticism about the MC being too willing to feminise, well you don't have too, you can just keep going to the college and studying, work at the freight yard, clean the neighbour’s apartment and the bar's toilets. Rather boring but quite realistic :)

Criticism also about the lack of NPC reaction to presenting feminine. This is a writing issue, coding NPCs to react to appearance is a big job. It means quantifying the MCs appearance, build, hair, clothing, shoes, jewelery, makeup? and then coding an appropriate response for each NPC. Maybe it will come in time.

Finally translation issues. Using Firefox with the auto translate option makes the game playable if not smooth. For the untranslated text in popups, select the text and translate it manually using the right-click menu option.

-The bugs previous reviews mentioned are a translation issue.

-The game is rather grindy.

-It doesn't go from feminisation to whoring like many other games did, it starts at whoring without waiting for feminisation.

-Which means it's MM heavy.

And that's about all I can say because I couldn't stomach it and quit.

Watching a fully male MC sucking dicks for weeks just isn't my kind of TF game.

And don't even get me started on how "visit a clinic to cut your own balls off" isn't really a transformation.

That said it seems like a lot of care went into UI and planning various game mechanics, so maybe this is a game to watch for someone with a different taste.

P.S. I don't recall it being directly mentioned, but judging by names of the characters the game is actually set in Russia which makes it all the more difficult to believe because Russia isn't that kind of country. Tolerance of deviancy in it is quite low, and of MM pairings in particular is even more so, especially among the men (the heterosexual ones, obviously). MC's reaction (or rather a lack thereof) when finding out his friend is whoring himself out to men is particularly difficult to believe. As is his decision to follow suit. Unless of cause he's already a deviant himself, which, according to his starting stats, he is clearly not.

@Author, I'd recommend you either change the game's location or re-write the intro and maybe even the early game to explain MC's behaviour better. The disbelief is strong in this one. Not that the porn plots were ever meant to make a lot of sense, but Russia happens to be among the countries where this makes the least sense possible.

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After some bainiac with PMs turned off has decided that I need Google and Wikipedia to tell me what society is like in a country I live in, I realised there are two things this review is lacking.

Fist:

I have to clarify - those last two passages are there because that IS a noticeable issue. It's not just some pet peeve to rant about, it hurts the plot. I meant it when I said "The disbelief is strong in this one." MC's actions are so unrealistic they create a hole in the story.

There's too big of a gap between MC's background and his easy acceptance of his new occupation. That gap needs to be at least partially bridged in some way for it to stop hurting the plot.

That said I have to admit, I am ranting a bit "while I'm at it", but I wouldn't bother if there wasn't any real issue with it.

Second:

Giving me more examples of my country being misrepresented isn't going to give me any new info to work with. I've seen enough of them to last several lifetimes already. Don't bother trying to teach me about Russian society if your own experience is so remote, TYVM.

The author is actually as aware of said low level of tolerance as any Russian may be expected to be. Which is made apparent from one of the early scenes where MC and his friend are being insulted by a bully.

Why they failed to act on said awareness when considering MC's characterisation is beyond my ken. I only know that they did, and that's the core of the issue with the plot.

Seems like a generic "earn money by becoming a sissy whore" game, but it's hard to get very far in it because of all of the bugs I encountered - namely broken links not working, which is horrible for a Twine game. I'm not sure if these bugs exist in the game itself, or if they are happening because of the Google translate, which may be the case. Point being, I could barely get 10 minutes into the game before I started getting stuck because of this problem, often repeatedly. 

an impressive start, once you get past the auto translate isue is done with systems, only lacks further content but that will come with time.

There is quite a bit here  once you  figure out where to go and what to do 

at the unversity you can attend class there is a sports section to work on your body  to make your self more masculine or feminine  increase your stamina etc 

the hostpital is good for  treating infection and for transitions

the mall is there for all your shopping needs

the bar  has a gloyhole to earn money starting out  reccommend buying the dildos at the sex store in the mall to train your throat  and help you give better blowjobs

once you become better at  sex and get a more feminine look you can pick up guys out side the bar  and make double the money you can from the gloryhole  

Now the donwside  : the translation  works for the main body , but  you have to refresh the tanslation for time to time to see what day of the week it is 

and some items  have a russian description that wont translate  at all

All in all its a very good start to a game ....can't wait to see how it progresses  Keep up the good work