Don't waste your time downloading this. It has the potential to be great but there just isn't any content yet. Idk why people like releasing versions of a game that don't actually have anything in them yet.
The game is basically, "find your class in a confusing map, do it, go to the next one, do it, repeat 10x until you begin your transformation, then it ends." You basically start to get skinny before it ends.
The writing is there, the pictures are great, the atmosphere is good, but there is just way too much tedious clicking for not that much actual plot or transformation. Releases like these basically attract poor reviews because there's nothing there yet. This is like an alpha of an alpha and it really shouldn't be up yet.
Um... let say this one need a lot of polishing. This is linear and the writing is so so. Placeholder are quite plenty. People usually have no idea what to do next and have to trial and error. You can talk to many people but most of them said the same line from the beginning all the way to the end.
This can get big and good, but it is not at this moment.
awesome i cant wait for the next update i hope it soon i cant wait to continue the story
This game so far has content to keep you busy for about half an hour before you reach the end of what is made. From just that this seems like it will be a very good game, although if I had to say my biggest problem with it, it would have to be how linear the game is so far. I understand in the future the choices that you make will probably make a difference (hopefully) but for now you just follow a strict schedule. Although I do have to agree it is nice that all the pictures used are made by the game maker which means that he doesn't describe the pictures, he let's the pictures show what he described. This may not seem big but it gives them the freedom to do pretty much whatever they want to. So I will give it a 4 out of 5 starts for now, I will update this after the full game is completed. Although I would personally suggest that you play this game, it is not the best game right now but you will see the huge potential this game has. So all I have to say now is to keep up the good work!
A very good start, I can't wait to see more. Although you need someone to go over your writing, as your grammar and word choices are off in places, and I would suggest making the font smaller so that we don't always have to scroll back to see what text blurb was just posted in full.