I found myself very impressed with this submission.
Writing is great and very detailed (some spelling mistakes but nothing too significant) and the only code errors I found were the references to bust sizes that were off due to the original base code being one description while the event code referring to another description (I'll catalog it and note it on the TFGS forum thread to help the author later), but it wasn't game breaking. The lack of images in this game is not a detriment with the strength of the writing allowing you to clearly understand where you are, what the scene is and what is going on around you at all times.
Transformations are many and varied, with the likelihood of your avatar being transformed increasing depending on what level of craziness you follow in the story. It does reach a point in the tale where you can begin to pick off when you know a choice is likely to transform you, but that just increases the fun if you're intentionally trying to do that. Scenes that you can find your avatar in are also varied with some random encounters written into the game, which do work well and are not linked to your transformations in whether or not they occur.
Interactivity in the game is good with items that could can potentially pick-up or receive through your event encounters, but you'll always be on a main linear path progression forwards through the story. This is well handled however by multiple branching choices that tangent off the main tale for a time before you eventually end up back on it, allowing you different things to encounter with each playthrough and seeing the deeper consequences of your choices each time around.
Code-wise, the game is very solid. As mentioned before the only errors I found were with bust size references and there was this one point on the new content where there was an extra bracket on a choice, but it was not severe or game breaking.
Having played an earlier version of this game but not reviewed it then as it was very alpha, I am pleased with the progress that this submission has made and it is one of the best games here at the TFGS. And that is not a statement I make lightly compared to some of the heavyweight author submissions already at the TFGS.
Highly recommended. I would love to see this game finished some day.
This is probably one of the best succubus transformation stories i've ever read, the detail is great, the choices you make are pretty impactful, and its a bit of a bittersweet end that this most likely won't be continued further, i still reccommend giving it a go, as there's a lot of awesome twists and turns with this story, and unlike so many others out there, despite it being incomplete, this is the most complete type of this story i've read so far. totally worth.
Excellent. Great story, good writing, fun transformations. What more can you ask for?
This game, while very old on the site, is a very good play and read. I'm pretty sure it's never going to get more chapters which is a great shame because the characters are great, the story is enthralling and the writing is Above S Grade. If you haven't played through this at least once, I highly recommend it.
Deep into the experience of a holy warrior turned into a member of opposing faction and sexy about exploration of being a lustful succubus.