Bad short game!!
Avarages 12 grammatical, 8 lexic, 19 logical and 3 other errors! Per word!!
Don't play tihs!
Short, bitter and to the point. It's not a happy story, but that's not what it's for. The extremely clipped prose is interesting, but that makes word choice all the more important. There were a few places where poor word choice was made all the more glaring because each word is that much more important. Also, I'm not sure if the game was trying to be funny or not with the jokes about the PC's small size, and other jokes. It kinda clashed with the otherwise dark feel of the rest of the story.
All in all, though, this is a good piece of short fiction. It's almost the CYOA equivalent of flash fiction. If the author was a little stronger, the game would be that much better, but I don't recognise the author's name. If this is the author's first game, it shows a lot of potential talent, and I would like to see more!