Ok, i will wait for the males. then

good game make it big and make it better than the rest

I like where this is going so far interesting can't wait for more ;p really got my attention on this one :3

Really good start, well written and decent in most other aspects. My only complaint is the lack of content right now, therefore my only request is that you make more! Keep up the good work, you mihgt really have something here.

Not bad, as a story, up to the end of day 1. Plenty writtings. Reasonable story, Little choices and some grammer/format errors at this stage. It is called alpha for a reason. I shall come back later when this is more ready.