Well, this is not my thing, but the linear story is neat and tidy. It is still developing, currently at the end of the appearance transformation and nothing else, about 2 minutes game play. However it is hosted online and you do not have to download it somewhere. Just click and run. If you like the theme I think it is a must go, and if you are not, there is no harm clicking on the link trying it out.

The good:  Its different.  There must be a niche for this because I've seen a few things that resemble this genre so good on this writer for coming out with something that hits that mark.  It's relatively typo free and it has some fun link swaps after you get mind controlled.

The .. not good for me:  Its a story.. not much of a game.  I don't think its being pushed as a game though so thats probably okay.  However - its very linear.  You ARE going down this set path... once you get mind controlled you actually have a single path to follow.  There is a funny little illusion of control switch, but its an illusion.  

 The writing is fairly lock step.  This happens to you.. this happens to you.. this next thing happens.  Its a COMPLETE Deus Ex Machina.  Nothing really has reason or is explain.. it happens and you deal with it.  Though oddly you deal with it quite well.  If I woke up naked in a pink room and *SPOILER ALERT!!!! STOP READING IF YOU HATE SPOILERS** a 7 foot teddy bear tackled me.. they'd be dragging a mostly-beat-to-death dude down the hall to turn into a slave cause .. you have no idea what's coming.  

Anyways - its meant to be fun and hit a niche and I'm sure it does that.  Have fun!

Well, I really like where this is headed, caters to my fetishes quite nicely so far. The Patreon stuff lays it on a bit thick, this is your first game on this website and it's not overly long yet, so... yeah. Still, congratulations on the work done so far, I hope you'll expand the game accordingly. I also recommend opening a forum thread for the game and linking it with the database entry here.