tl;dr excellent MtF game focused on submission and willing MtF, still good for those into putting up a little bit of resistance before submitting (but only a little!). Takes a while to pick up the pace and doesn't have many pictures. Story type, no grinding or sandbox/simulation stuff. Lots of choices to make.
+++ Your choices matter in this game. Yes, most of them don't change anything important and there is some heavy railroading at certain points of the story, but there is still a lot of choices that are meaningful or at least feel meaningful during your first playthrough. I'm giving this 3 "+" signs despite the occasional railroading because longer games with choices like that are a rarity.
++ No grinding.
++ The game is quite long and remains interesting from start to finish. If you're into its listed fetishes, obviously.
+ There are four important characters you will interact with, and two (maybe three) of them make the story fun to get through. Would give this point even more "+" signs but Toby is such an inconsistent mess of a character I almost put this in the "In between" section of my review, where I list the things that are neither very good or very bad but still worth mentioning.
+ Interesting initial transformation phase. It's definitely not one of those games where your character turns into a supermodel in the second scene and keeps riding the cock carousel for no reason until the author runs out of ideas.
+ When you choose to act like a slut, it really does feel like it was your choice. This is not one of those linear games where your character is forced to have sex with specific characters to progress the story. The transformation part is railroaded, but what you do with your transformed body is mostly up to you. Being able to refuse is great because nothing ruins the game as much as clicking "NO" and seeing your character do "no... YES!!!".
+ The author did a pretty good job at making the initial changes your character will go through feel gradual and relatively smooth.
+/- Technically not related to the game, but the Synopsis and Plot tabs (and even the title) are a bit misleading, which may discourage potential players. Yes, you start as "Matt Mason, a nearly thirty year old supermarket clerk", but that job won't matter in the game. Which is great because playing as an "overweight, directionless virgin" doesn't sound too attractive.
+/- No nsfw pictures.
+/- The transformations affect the personality of your character. Some people may like it, but if you hate it when your character acts like you don't want it to act, there will be a few scenes in this game that will put you off a bit. None of them will force you to have sex with someone you don't want to, though.
+/- You have some control over how girly you become, though there is only one kind of "girly" in this game. The bright pink kind.
+/- If you like to be in a sex scene with every second click, you might dislike this game, or at least its beginning. The story starts slowly, but it's good enough to pay attention to it, and its pace becomes close to perfect in the middle of the game.
+/- The game has multiple endings (and a few dead ends), which is good, however most of them feel rushed. Those endings make you feel like most of the events and choices you made after meeting Doug for the first time didn't matter. Worst part about this is that those choices are presented alost like they're marking the beginning of another "chapter" of the game, so you get your hopes up only to be surprised by a sudden ending.
- Toby's is more of a plot device than a person. Should be one of the most important characters in the story but you barely pay attention to him because his personality is very inconsistent.
-- Certain events happen with little to no buildup, the player is often faced with a choice between acting like a huge slut and flat out refusing to do something, with no "moderate" option in between.
Final mark: 8/10
One of the best games on the site in my opinion, it's great to see the author expanding the story, character interactions and PC descriptions, those are the areas the game lacks a bit in. It's well written, scripted nicely, the UI looks good, the author clearly knows what they're doing with twine, and has some good ideas, so I hope the current progress continues.
Good game. It's very hot. I absolutely hate grinding in these games. Jerking off while trying to move the story forward is absolutely retarded. Thankfully that is certainly not the case here. Some storylines are left hanging though. But still 2 thumbs and my dick pointing to the stars.
I really liked the game. I dont agree with those below. A must play in my book,
You made me laugh with the characters, made me love them, i got dem feels. The moment Em does the chocolate i felt so betrayed that i had to create an account only to tell you that you created a hole in me that won't heal. Thank you.