For now it's only a concept, and I would like feedbacks about my writing. About the game, it's a story about a boy who finds something which could be or could not be magic. Play the game and you will see, for now it's ridiculously short.
Thanks everyone! Here is another update, if you have suggestion or critics, feel free to say. For now there is no tf... yet, but there will be, so hang on.
Guys, just fixing some UI. It was very hard to read so I changed the color, will do it again if I have too
The discussion tread for those shy of posting on my blog.
Here is my blog where I will upload the game regularly. Thanks already, I know it's annoying to see so many unfinished and short games.
Excellent. Some writing issues, sure, and I'd have loved to see a pic of the mom in the intro sequence, but those things really don't detract from a very solid foundation for a game.
You have my official seal of approval. Good job!
As of 0.0.1 this game is very short. But it looks like it could be very good nonetheless. I am eagerly awaiting updates and hope this does not turn out to be another abandoned game.
I really enjoyed it.
only con: its too short (yet) :D
Well, there we go.
That was fun, one of those good old very fappable games!
I can tell English isn't your first language, but it's not bothersome. I'd actually say it's well-written.
I look forward to seeing a lot more content!