Very hot, very fun story, what choices exist are very good. The writing is quite good, too. At first it comes off as your typically absurd light-hearted fantasy tf porn game, and that doesn't change exactly, but as you explore the different branches of the story, you get the sense that there is deeper lore here too, like there might actually be a coherent explanation for the ridiculous things that are happening. I was strongly reminded of the book "John Dies at the End," to the point where I think it might actually be an influence on the game, and I am here for it.

Pros: good writing/storytelling, hot fetish content, solid story options to choose between, and no low-quality artwork to offend the eyes.

Cons: I want more! The story is incomplete, and more choices would also be nice (but of course writing new story branches will just make it take even longer to finish the story), and it could be enhanced with the addition of some (high-quality) artwork, as well.

Really original game. 

Very limited choice (as far as I can tell you only actually make 7 choices - each one a binary choice between 2 options) but this actually makes each choice super meaningful. 

The writing is top quality, and the story whilst surreal is captivating. 

Quite extreme in content, and very graphic but not unpleasant. 

Looking forward for this to be finished. 

Great writing and a sexy and loving story! Great work!

Good writings. Interesting / erotic stories. Won't call it a game, thou. Just two stories in parallel timeline with a lot of next page buttons which you can pick one to read each pass.

First off, this is incredibly well written.  Fantastically so, imho.  The writing is clean, concise and skips along like a stone skimmed across a lake.  The relationship between the two leads is natural, and their decent into mind controlled slavery more so.  Far too often you get games that rush through the ying-yang of pull and denial that makes the decent into slavery and transformation rather more-ish.  It's a CYOA so there's no grind to have to work through to get to the good stuff.  The ability to skip forward in the story is a wonderful addition, allowing you to get to the parts that you...ahem...'appreciate', easier.  

Negatives?  Just the unfinished story at the moment, but what is available is susbtantial for such an early release.