l haven't played much of it so far, but so far, l like it. It Has a lot of potential.

Pros: interesting concept l haven't seen on here before, paper doll that changes, as well as lots of lewd, drawn art, and as everything is random, you can reset the tasks lf you don't get anything you want (though that defeats the purpose IMO)

Cons: So far, it's just the fact that the paper doll changes don't match what you do. For example, on day 1, l chose "Hair removal" and "Panties", but when the doll changed, it grew breasts and long hair, and had smaller genitals.

Lets start with the good: 
There are multiple endings that can be achieved depending on the scenes you select. I view this as promising if gameplay mechanics ever get introduced this promises to be a game with replay-ability.

There is a paper doll implemented which changes over time. This is good because we can end up with a responsive paper doll that changes in the same way our character changes over time.

The premise is cute, original, and definitely fills a void for active games on this site.

The mode with real world instruction creates possibilities for people who have the appropriate toys and the desire to play along with their character.

Okay now for criticism:

The descriptions of events are not descriptions of actions and consequences but more like scene blurbs. Someone below called them scene descriptions, I believe. I find them to be very unrewarding at the moment. I would like to see gameplay mechanics come into play even if it is just that good things happen if certain scenes are viewed before others, nuetral things happen in other orders, Bad things happen in a third set of orders and really bad things could happen in a fourth. I have even more thoughts on this I will post in the forum.

The paper doll changes physically in ways that do not resemble the scenes and suggested consequences of the scenes you select. This is IMO the biggest and most glaring weakness of the concept.

The real world instructions require hundreds of dollars worth of sex toys to be able to properly follow, and some of the instructions are potentially quite messy. (proceed with caution)

Overall I will check back on this in later updates.

Not bad i feel like hteir need to be less repetion also maybe have a good ending

Ok for now, lack of different pictures, but i'll keep an eye on it and you should too

Very early in development. More of an outline than a game or story, at this point - the text is all just placeholders of what will happen.

I hope the structure becomes more interesting as it develops because, at the moment, there's nothing playful - it's just scene selection.

It's a cute premise, though. I hope it goes somewhere good, but it's too early to tell.