v0.4.a:

Graphics in the game are minimal and the game layout is basic. Interactivity in the game is multiple choice at the start then simple choice selection as you are railroaded through the story branch you've chosen. Writing is basic but you know what's going on and the general gist of where you are.

It's currently a very alpha game and I can see possibility of expanding it future into a solid full world exploration game/sim-life game, but what's here right now in this release is barebones at best.

Worth a look.

Lots of potential for an amazing game here.  

Games can be fun--play this, learn about a world, collect things, read lots of words--but sometimes you just want to beat your genitals to a nonstop erotic thriller and there aren't enough of those.  People say "gif delivery system" like it's a bad thing.  I say we don't have enough gif delivery systems.  

This game has the potential to stand in the pantheon with Stranded, Bimbo House, and Debt.  It just needs a few things:

1. A proofreader.  Even games made by English speakers for English speakers have a proofreader.  Get one.
2. More images that match the situation.  I was looking at a sex gif while ordering bruch.  
3. Path Clarity.  I have to pick which item to do a transformation with but have no idea which item I should use for my personal desired outcome.  
4. Pronoun Clarity.  When bodies get switched it is very hard to tell if "He" refers to the male in the female body or the female in the male body.  And vice versa.  Names don't fix this problem; does "Andrew" refer to Andrew's mind or Andrew's body?  
5. Scrolling.  Some screens can't be scrolled down to advance the story.  I figured out that I had to hit Tab and the page jumps to the link.  Will others figure that out or remain stuck?  

This is an early version of the game.  Looking forward to later versions.

So I'm gonna try to be as constructive as I can here.

This game is interesting as a case study.

It has Events, but no characters (development I mean), no world building and nothing of substance.

The Author would do well to expand what they have before teasing more content.

I want to be elanient as it IS a Concept but due to the lack of world building I'm worried it will continue in this manner.

I'm not worried about Spelling errors as it is a Concept and personally I do a sh*t ton of mistakes in concept/beta, that's for later. I also can tell ESoL is in full effect.

But even if ESoL wasnt an issue the content is lacking foundation, it's just click to do thing with characterss with no development.

My advice to Author is to pull back and think about the WORLD not just the events.

Hopefully they take this advice to heart and make a better game.

For anyone looking to play, I'd avoid 0.3 and look at future releases.

I can usually handle poor english; but at this stage there is no redeeming qualities for either of his games.

First time I ever write to give a bad review, but this "game" deserves it. I'm spanish, so I know what it is to write in another language, but this is another level, another entire league. My eyes bled when I tried to read this.

In its current state, this game is not playable, much less enjoyable. Sorry for being this harsh, but it is the truth.